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		<title>The Words that Maketh Novels</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Dec 2011 00:31:56 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Martin McCallion</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[It seems like almost no time at all since I last wrote about not completing NaNoWriMo. But here we are again. A year passes like nothing. I wasn&#8217;t strictly following the rules (but they&#8217;re only really guidelines, and optional at &#8230; <a href="http://devilgate.org/blog/2011/12/02/the-words-that-maketh-novels/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It seems like almost no time at all since I <a href="http://devilgate.org/blog/2010/11/30/nono/">last wrote about</a> not completing <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/participants/devilgate">NaNoWriMo</a>.  But here we are again.  A year passes like nothing.</p>

<p>I wasn&#8217;t strictly following the rules (but they&#8217;re only really guidelines, and optional at that) in that I wasn&#8217;t starting a new novel this time.  I was carrying on the same one that I started last year, and I hadn&#8217;t written many more in the interim.  I managed just under 15,000 words this year, which is slightly less than last time (and less than a tenth of my erstwhile OU Creative Writing classmate Karl&#8217;s <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/participants/ksg1981">crazy figure</a>)    </p>

<p>It has, however, given me a new kickstart, and I intend to carry the momentum onwards, but at a more manageable rate.  My novel (working title <cite>Accidental Upgrade</cite>) currently stands at around 36,000 words.  I&#8217;ve set myself a target of 80,000 by the end of February.  That is more like the length of a modern novel, and achievable at a rate of around 475 words a day, according to <a href="http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener.php">Scrivener</a>.</p>

<p>That&#8217;s much more feasible for me than Nano&#8217;s 1667.  Though I&#8217;m just realising that I said essentially the same thing last year, and it obviously didn&#8217;t work.  Still, I feel more confident this time.  I wrote around 600 words today, and I&#8217;ve got Scrivener to help me keep on track.</p>
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		<title>Tell, and Maybe Show as Well</title>
		<link>http://devilgate.org/blog/2011/06/09/tell-and-maybe-show-as-well/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jun 2011 21:50:33 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Martin McCallion</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Prospective &#8212; or actual &#8212; writers are always given the advice, &#8216;show, don&#8217;t tell.&#8217; It&#8217;s considered to be more engaging as a storytelling technique to let your reader know what&#8217;s happening by letting them experience it via the experiences of &#8230; <a href="http://devilgate.org/blog/2011/06/09/tell-and-maybe-show-as-well/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Prospective &#8212; or actual &#8212; writers are always given the advice, &#8216;show, don&#8217;t tell.&#8217;  It&#8217;s considered to be more engaging as a storytelling technique to let your reader know what&#8217;s happening by letting them experience it via the experiences of your characters, rather than merely informing them what happens to your characters.</p>

<p>Good enough advice, in general.  But there are always counterexamples.</p>

<p>This morning on the way to work I read a story on Tor&#8217;s website, which is almost entirely telling; and almost entirely wonderful.</p>

<p>&#8216;<a href="http://www.tor.com/stories/2011/06/six-months-three-days">Six Months, Three Days</a>&#8217;, by Charlie Jane Anders.  Highly recommended.</p>
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		<title>Link: Writers’ Bloc – a Literary Band</title>
		<link>http://devilgate.org/blog/2011/01/08/link-writers%e2%80%99-bloc-%e2%80%93-a-literary-band/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 08 Jan 2011 00:21:41 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Martin McCallion</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Writers’ Bloc – a Literary Band « East Kent Live Lit. Some nice thoughts on what my friends in Edinburgh get up to with their spoken-word performances and chapbook publishing. I really must get up for one of their performances.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://livelit.wordpress.com/2011/01/05/writers-bloc-a-literary-band/'>Writers’ Bloc – a Literary Band « East Kent Live Lit</a>.</p>

<p>Some nice thoughts on what my friends in Edinburgh get up to with their spoken-word performances and chapbook publishing.</p>

<p>I really must get up for one of their performances.</p>
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		<title>NoNo</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 2010 23:10:52 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Martin McCallion</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Well, this is my NaNoFail report. I managed around 15,000 words. Which isn&#8217;t bad in its way, but is not only a lot less than the desired 50,000, it&#8217;s also less than last time, when I at least made it &#8230; <a href="http://devilgate.org/blog/2010/11/30/nono/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, this is my <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/user/658975">NaNoFail</a> report.  I managed around 15,000 words.  Which isn&#8217;t bad in its way, but is not only a lot less than the desired 50,000, it&#8217;s also less than last time, when I at least made it to 20,000.</p>

<p>Oh well.  The plan now is not to stop, because then I&#8217;d most likely never finish it.  Instead, I&#8217;m going to carry on, with a much reduced target of, say, 500 words per day, and see where that takes me.</p>

<p><strong>Edited to say:</strong> That&#8217;s 15,000, of course, not the meaningless &#8220;15,00&#8221;.</p>
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		<title>The Day After Hallowe&#8217;en</title>
		<link>http://devilgate.org/blog/2010/10/31/the-day-after-halloween/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Oct 2010 23:27:27 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Martin McCallion</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Well, midnight on the 31st of October is fast rolling round. We&#8217;re not long back from a week in the Highlands of Scotland (very wet, but great, thanks). It&#8217;ll soon be the 1st of November, which means two things this &#8230; <a href="http://devilgate.org/blog/2010/10/31/the-day-after-halloween/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, midnight on the 31st of October is fast rolling round.  We&#8217;re not long back from a week in the Highlands of Scotland (very wet, but great, thanks).  It&#8217;ll soon be the 1st of November, which means two things this year.</p>

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<li><p>We&#8217;ll be able to buy <a href="http://mitchbenn.com/">Mitch Benn&#8217;s</a> mighty &#8216;<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=youtu.be&#038;v=p3q2iZuU5WM&#038;gl=GB">I&#8217;m Proud of the BBC</a>&#8217; in downloadable single format.  So head off and do that now, and help it to chart.  I&#8217;ll wait.</p>

<p>Actually, it&#8217;s not yet midnight as I type, and I&#8217;ve just downloaded it.</p></li>
<li><p><a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/">NaNoWriMo</a> is about to start.  I&#8217;m having a go this year.  <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/658975">Wish me luck</a>.</p>

<p>I last tried it in <a href="http://devilgate.org/blog/2004/12/07/writing-identity-and-voting/">2004</a>, which is much longer ago than I thought.  I sort of had a half-hearted poke at it last year, but soon stopped.  I&#8217;m hoping that expressing my intention in public like this will help to keep me going.</p>

<p>We&#8217;ll see, of course.</p>

<p>I see that the approaching start has brought the NaNoWriMo site to its knees.  Oh well.  Hopefully they&#8217;ll get things back together.</p></li>
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		<title>Link: Screenwriting Tip Of The Day by William C. Martell &#8211; Romeo to Rambo</title>
		<link>http://devilgate.org/blog/2010/09/24/link-screenwriting-tip-of-the-day-by-william-c-martell-romeo-to-rambo/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 24 Sep 2010 14:00:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Martin McCallion</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[How good scripts get turned into bad movies: Screenwriting Tip Of The Day by William C. Martell - Romeo to Rambo]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How good scripts get turned into bad movies: <a href="http://www.scriptsecrets.net/tips/tip215.htm">Screenwriting Tip Of The Day by William C. Martell - Romeo to Rambo</a></p>
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		<title>Link: How to Write a Story, by Robert Jackson Bennett</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Apr 2010 16:00:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Martin McCallion</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[&#34;The first step is waking up.&#34; Brilliant: How to Write a Story, by Robert Jackson Bennett]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&quot;The first step is waking up.&quot;  Brilliant: <a href="http://www.orbitbooks.net/2009/11/30/how-to-write-a-story/">How to Write a Story, by Robert Jackson Bennett</a></p>
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		<title>Link: A Self-Referential Story</title>
		<link>http://devilgate.org/blog/2009/10/17/link-a-self-referential-story/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Oct 2009 10:00:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Martin McCallion</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[&#34;Sentient sentences&#34;: an astonishing piece of work.: A Self-Referential Story]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#34;Sentient sentences&#34;: an astonishing piece of work.: <a href="http://consc.net/misc/moser.html">A Self-Referential Story</a></p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>Michael Marshall Smith speaks wisely on opinions on the internet</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Sep 2009 21:16:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Martin McCallion</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[If you can&#8217;t take the time and trouble to learn how to write a coherent sentence, then why on earth do you believe people should listen to what you have to say? Oh, yes.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>If you can&#8217;t take the time and trouble to learn how to write a coherent sentence, then why on earth do you believe people should listen to what you have to say?</p></blockquote>

<p><a href="http://michaelmarshallsmith.wordpress.com/2009/09/01/customer-reviews-suck-%e2%80%94-nuff-said/">Oh, yes.</a></p>]]></content:encoded>
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		<title>Publication</title>
		<link>http://devilgate.org/blog/2009/05/07/publication/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 07 May 2009 22:35:40 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Martin McCallion</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi, I&#8217;m back. Have you missed me? I have some good news. First Edition is a new magazine publishing new writing: fiction, poetry, and reviews. It&#8217;s just reached issue 4. That&#8217;s an important one to remember. Issue 4. That&#8217;s the &#8230; <a href="http://devilgate.org/blog/2009/05/07/publication/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, I&#8217;m back.  Have you missed me?  I have some good news.</p>

<p><cite><a href="http://www.firsteditionpublishing.co.uk/">First Edition</a></cite> is a new magazine publishing new writing: fiction, poetry, and reviews.  It&#8217;s just reached issue 4.  That&#8217;s an important one to remember.  Issue 4.  That&#8217;s the one you should go and buy.</p>

<p>That&#8217;s the one that contains a poem by me.</p>

<p>Oh yes.  I am a published poet, as of &#8211; well, just about today, really.</p>

<p>Available now from some good magazine shops, allegedly.  But certainly from that there <a href="http://www.firsteditionpublishing.co.uk/">website</a>.</p>

<p>Go on, check it out.  You know you want to.</p>]]></content:encoded>
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